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Several days after the discovery of his abilities, he took several small belequel stones, that nonetheless would require dozens of men to even lift, and threw them at the guards of the mine their family worked in, killing the guards instantly. Gened then proclaimed the mine to be the property of his family, and his family freed. In a passionate speech right outside the mine, he pledged to use his powers to free the miners from Hohned's yoke.
 
Several days after the discovery of his abilities, he took several small belequel stones, that nonetheless would require dozens of men to even lift, and threw them at the guards of the mine their family worked in, killing the guards instantly. Gened then proclaimed the mine to be the property of his family, and his family freed. In a passionate speech right outside the mine, he pledged to use his powers to free the miners from Hohned's yoke.
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He was surprised to learn that his family was starkly against it: they hoped that he could instead become a wealthy man and improve their lot, but now they feared that they would simply be killed by the state as rebels. In the next few days, Gened's elderly mother tried to have him murdered, but he was secretly warned by his younger sister Dareened. Gened then left his home.
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He was surprised to learn that his family was starkly against it: they hoped that he could instead become a wealthy man and improve their lot, but now they feared that they would simply be killed by the state as rebels. In the next few days, Gened's elderly mother tried to have him kidnapped, but he was secretly warned by his younger sister Dareened. Gened then left his home.
    
When the miners learned about Gened's family trying to murder him, some of them conspired to retaliate and managed to kill one of his brothers and his mother.
 
When the miners learned about Gened's family trying to murder him, some of them conspired to retaliate and managed to kill one of his brothers and his mother.