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The chronicler: /* History */

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History

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The chronicler: /* The City That Defeated the Gods */

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The City That Defeated the Gods

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 === The Western Gates ===
-TBD: Main food importer. Sex, food and recreation for the traveling kingdoms.
+The abrupt dissolution of Asdoh led to the breakdown of the complex trade system between Tarnaria and the rest of the world, the majority of which ran through Estonoh. Gantolia, Teamatian, Ronas and Western Dantria were all connected to Tarnaria through Asdoh. Barud's attempts to channel some of those routes its way have largely failed.
 === The City That Defeated the Gods ===

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	Families quickly moved to Tonaran which was considered to be safer against the constant threat of Stogen, as well as opportunistic [[Toor_(political_entity)\|toors]] forming in the area en masse. As more families moved in, the fortress began to be expanded.		Families quickly moved to Tonaran which was considered to be safer against the constant threat of Stogen, as well as opportunistic [[Toor_(political_entity)\|toors]] forming in the area en masse. As more families moved in, the fortress began to be expanded.
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		+	=== The Western Gates ===
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		+	TBD: Main food importer. Sex, food and recreation for the traveling kingdoms.

	=== The City That Defeated the Gods ===		=== The City That Defeated the Gods ===

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 {{City infobox
 |name=Tonaran
-|image=Tonaran_at_night.jpg
+|image=Tonaran2.jpg
 |map=
 |country=The city state of Tonaran

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 |disestablished=
 }}
-'''Tonaran''' was an important city state during the [[dantrian_calendar|second revolution]], widely known as an impenetrable fortress due to its innovative gate towers and a well trained army that attracted people from all over [[Heran]]. Tonaran's gate towers principles became widespread throughout Heran by the end of the second revolution.
+'''Tonaran''' was an important city state during the [[dantrian_calendar|second revolution]], widely known as an impenetrable fortress due to its sophisticated fortifications, as well as a trained army that attracted people from all over [[Heran]].
-Known as "the City That Defeated the Gods", Tonaran's reputation prevented many warlords from attempting to march on the city, but it was finally defeated in 1513 by [[Kren Oordar]], who thought he was attacking Kamey-Yr. The attack was completely unexpected and the city fell after two days of fighting, but it remained a major stronghold and its reputation did not suffer, instead elevating the reputation of Oordars as legendary warriors.
+Known as "the City That Defeated the Gods", Tonaran's reputation prevented many warlords from attempting to march on the city for half a revolution. It was finally defeated in 1513 by [[Kren Oordar]], who thought he was attacking [[Kamey-Yr]]. The attack was completely unexpected and the city fell after two days of fighting. Its reputation, however, did not suffer, instead elevating the reputation of Oordars as legendary warriors.
 Tonaran then became the seat of the [[Oordar clan]] and later the [[Dormon family]].
 == History ==

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 The official date of Tonaran's founding comes only about 150 years later. It's not clear who was ruling the city at the time, but a letter from the "Gole of Tonaran" is recorded in 342 [[SR]] in [[Maird]], inviting the king of Maird to the second anniversary of the city's founding.
-As the age of [[Moroh]] completely took hold of northern Tarnaria, the area of former Asdoh was now dominated by numerous toors, constantly fighting for resources and domination. Tonaran's position on the eastern bank of Erna made it a gateway to both the [[Commonground]] from the west and to Teamatian from Tarnaria.
+As the age of [[Moroh]] completely took hold of northern Tarnaria, the area of former Asdoh was now dominated by numerous toors, constantly fighting for resources and domination. Tonaran's position on the eastern bank of Erna made it a gateway to both the [[Commonground]] from the west and to [[Ronas]] and Teamatian from Tarnaria.
-Its position and wealth began to irritate toors that wanted to inflict enough damage on it to force it to pay tribute. It was also the only major Xaewoon Blue city state in the area. But Tonaran managed to retain a powerful army and constantly improved its defenses. Its position on the bank of Erna made it very difficult to lay a siege.
+Its position and wealth began to irritate toors that wanted to inflict enough damage on it to force it to pay tribute. It was also the only major Xaewoon Blue city state in the area. But Tonaran managed to retain a powerful army and constantly improved its defenses. Its position on the bank of Erna made it very difficult to lay a siege. Additionally, it itself began to play the economics game, promoting serving in its army which actively sought out individual toors and battled them. Tonaran also began to play a role in north-central Continent.
 Tonaran's reputation as an impenetrable fortress became entrenched when several consecutive armies headed by famed superhero warriors were decisively defeated.

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	As the age of [[Moroh]] completely took hold of northern Tarnaria, the area of former Asdoh was now dominated by numerous toors, constantly fighting for resources and domination. Tonaran's position on the eastern bank of Erna made it a gateway to both the [[Commonground]] from the west and to Teamatian from Tarnaria.		As the age of [[Moroh]] completely took hold of northern Tarnaria, the area of former Asdoh was now dominated by numerous toors, constantly fighting for resources and domination. Tonaran's position on the eastern bank of Erna made it a gateway to both the [[Commonground]] from the west and to Teamatian from Tarnaria.
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		+	Its position and wealth began to irritate toors that wanted to inflict enough damage on it to force it to pay tribute. It was also the only major Xaewoon Blue city state in the area. But Tonaran managed to retain a powerful army and constantly improved its defenses. Its position on the bank of Erna made it very difficult to lay a siege.
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		+	Tonaran's reputation as an impenetrable fortress became entrenched when several consecutive armies headed by famed superhero warriors were decisively defeated.

	[[Blue Shield Squad]] were a group of superhero warriors from Commonground who have made a name for themselves during a battle at the Koatooy river on [[Laeooy Coast]]. They then promised to become the rulers of Tarnaria and began by marching on Tonaran, but were killed in the ensuing battle.		[[Blue Shield Squad]] were a group of superhero warriors from Commonground who have made a name for themselves during a battle at the Koatooy river on [[Laeooy Coast]]. They then promised to become the rulers of Tarnaria and began by marching on Tonaran, but were killed in the ensuing battle.

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 '''Tonaran''' was an important city state during the [[dantrian_calendar|second revolution]], widely known as an impenetrable fortress due to its innovative gate towers and a well trained army that attracted people from all over [[Heran]]. Tonaran's gate towers principles became widespread throughout Heran by the end of the second revolution.
-Known as "the City That Defeated the Gods", Tonaran's reputation prevented many warlords from attempting to march on the city, but it was finally defeated in 1513 by [[Kren Oordar]], who thought he was attacking Kamey-Yr. The attack was completely unexpected and the city fell after two days of fighting.
+Known as "the City That Defeated the Gods", Tonaran's reputation prevented many warlords from attempting to march on the city, but it was finally defeated in 1513 by [[Kren Oordar]], who thought he was attacking Kamey-Yr. The attack was completely unexpected and the city fell after two days of fighting, but it remained a major stronghold and its reputation did not suffer, instead elevating the reputation of Oordars as legendary warriors.
 Tonaran then became the seat of the [[Oordar clan]] and later the [[Dormon family]].
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 === Early history ===
 === The City That Defeated the Gods ===
 [[Blue Shield Squad]] were a group of superhero warriors from Commonground who have made a name for themselves during a battle at the Koatooy river on [[Laeooy Coast]]. They then promised to become the rulers of Tarnaria and began by marching on Tonaran, but were killed in the ensuing battle.

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 Known as "the City That Defeated the Gods", Tonaran's reputation prevented many warlords from attempting to march on the city, but it was finally defeated in 1513 by [[Kren Oordar]], who thought he was attacking Kamey-Yr. The attack was completely unexpected and the city fell after two days of fighting.
-Tonaran then became the seat of the [[Oordar clan]] and later the Darman family.
+Tonaran then became the seat of the [[Oordar clan]] and later the [[Dormon family]].
 == History ==
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 === Seat of the Oordar clan ===
-=== The Darman period ===
+=== The Dormon period ===
 === The fall ===

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 |country=The city state of Tonaran
 |government=Gole of Tonaran
-|established=
+|established=c. 340 [[SR]]
 |conquered=
 |disestablished=
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 Tonaran then became the seat of the [[Oordar clan]] and later the Darman family.
 == Blue Shield Squad ==
 [[Blue Shield Squad]] were a group of superhero warriors from Commonground who have made a name for themselves during a battle at the Koatooy river on [[Laeooy Coast]]. They then promised to become the rulers of Tarnaria and began by marching on Tonaran, but were killed in the ensuing battle.