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They then marched on Kamey-Yr, which at the time was a major trade center between Darda and Tarnaria and was also controlled by the Oordar clan. This set up a conflict between Hee and Iar and the rest of the family, resulting in the brothers' uncle [[Pherro Oordar|Pherro]] arriving to Delbar. Pherro knew nothing about the deal that Hee and Iar had made with Zor, so on arrival he bribed several commanders of the Delbar army and took control of the city. Zor was given no chance to explain the situation and was thrown in prison.

They then marched on Kamey-Yr, which at the time was a major trade center between Darda and Tarnaria and was also controlled by the Oordar clan. This set up a conflict between Hee and Iar and the rest of the family, resulting in the brothers' uncle [[Pherro Oordar|Pherro]] arriving to Delbar. Pherro knew nothing about the deal that Hee and Iar had made with Zor, so on arrival he bribed several commanders of the Delbar army and took control of the city. Zor was given no chance to explain the situation and was thrown in prison.

As the news reached the brothers, Iar marched on Delbar with a significant regiment and set up siege. Meanwhile, citizens of Delbar, feeling that they were being used as pawns in the Oordar clan power games, revolted and threw Pherro out, closing the gates and proclaiming independence from the Oordar clan altogether. That seemed to satisfy Iar, who took Pherro as prisoner and marched back to Kamey-Yr.

As the news reached the brothers, Iar marched on Delbar with a significant regiment and set up siege. Meanwhile, citizens of Delbar, feeling that they were being used as pawns in the Oordar clan power games, revolted and threw Pherro out, closing the gates and proclaiming independence from the Oordar clan altogether. That seemed to satisfy Iar, who took Pherro as prisoner and marched back to Kamey-Yr.